All this is just a long-winded way of me explaining that I like your version better, and I think you complete Edward’s character fully. As Seattle is ravaged by a string of mysterious killings and a malicious vampire continues her quest for revenge, Bella once again finds herself surrounded by danger. You shed new light on his character, where Meyer’s writing, while still good, doesn’t expand on what we would already expect from Edward. Readers captivated by Twilight and New Moon will eagerly devour the paperback edition Eclipse, the third book in Stephenie Meyer’s riveting vampire love saga. You expand Edward’s character by doing this. When the hot sun burned overhead, Minli’s knees shook from weariness. The mud stuck to their feet like glue and each seedling had to be painstakingly planted by hand. It was planting season, which was especially grueling. She doesn’t know that this aspect to him exists. CHAPTER 2 Every morning, before the sun rose, Minli, her mother, and father began work in the fields. Obviously Edward doesn’t act like an immature teenager, but sometimes his thoughts begin that way! When reading Bella’s perspective, it doesn’t seem like this flaw exists, but that’s because Edward is able to process his thoughts so much faster as a vampire. It is subtle, because a large part of his maturity is just who Edward is, but you capture his flawed teenage personality in his thoughts. You perfectly capture Edward’s teenager nature warring with the wise immortal side to him. The flaws she gives to him are flaws a vampire would have, but she misses the mark slightly. A link to an external website Midnight Sun chapters 13-24 submitted by a fan of Twilight Series. Meyer writes him as an almost omniscient, perfect creature. He had maturity and gained wisdom, but he is forever stuck at age 17. Introduction Midnight Sun, Part I, by Stephenie Meyer Chapters 1 through 12-A (on.
Yes, he was a mature teenager for his age (as he had a serious, focused soldier mindset), but he was still only 17. That much is evident in how he thinks and speaks. Well done! However, having said that, I also think that you capture a whole aspect to Edward that I believe is lacking in Meyer’s chapters!!! Yes, Edward, is around 107 (give or take, depending on what book it is) so he has that wisdom that comes with that age and being an immortal vampire.
If you added your half to Meyer’s half and made it a complete book, I think no one would recognize that it was written by two authors. Summer nights are the best time to spot the bears, even under the golden glow of the midnight sun.
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Hi there! I have read, and reread, and reread again, your stories because they are so good! I want to specifically comment on the way you write Edward. Avatar The Last Airbender Season 1 Full Download > DOWNLOAD.